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  • isha

    June 12, 2022 at 4:31 PM

    Information technology facilitates the transfer of information, which can be in any format. The influence of information technology has grown to such an extent that penetration of these technologies has started impacting our homes , leisure and employment significantly. This essay would be a discussion on the pros and cons of information technology.(I & T in small letters)

    The increased dependence on information technology utilities has affected human lifestyle. We have been over reliant on modern gadgets and the easiness that comes with them. The long term impacts have made us susceptible to lifestyle diseases such as obesity. There is also the influence of big tech companies who have targeted different strata of the population to push ads or monetize their free to use technology. There is also the issue of the rapid spread of misinformation, which at its worst may cause mob violence. Although we could find all these demerits, the rewards outweigh the risks.

    Rapid growth in the IT sector has boosted the appeal of service sectors. From an industrial perspective, rapid development is taking place in key sectors such as automation, cloud and software services in general. This push has boosted productivity creating millions of jobs thus providing living means to a lot of people. These developments have also been reflected in sectors such as defense, communication, media, etc. Nowadays, the media is a lot more accessible, facilitating information and entertainment among the masses.

    From all these observations, it could be summarised that the influence of information technology has a constructive impact on the course of humanity. We should be utilizing these to full extent however throwing a cautious eye to the problems associated with it is recommended.

    – Nice attempt.

    – Introduction is very important. Thesis and outline should be there.

    -Grammatical errors are in bold.

    -Use synonyms wherever possible so that repetition can be avoided.

    Most Importantly, clear explanation of main ideas should be there. Too many ideas in a single BP is making it confusing.

    Bands – 3.5/6

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