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enviornment (environment) – spelling errors
Let’s analyse – in formal style of writing, try to follow formal one.
cooprate (co-operate)
We (people) should use the amount of energy they use on daily
Every single (citizen) is responsible
on one hand(,) on the other hand (,) to sum up(,)- make use of punctuation
descharging (discharging)
ilegal (illegal)
takle (tackle)
calamites (calamities)
Feedback : word on spelling errors and sentence structure is very simple and basic , make use of varied range. point of view is also not clear, seems to be contradicting at few places.
Keep writing!!
Band: 2.5/6
