AdministratorJune 29, 2022 at 12:33 PM
enviornment (environment) – spelling errors
Let’s analyse – in formal style of writing, try to follow formal one.
We (people) should use the amount of energy they use on daily
Every single (citizen) is responsible
on one hand(,) on the other hand (,) to sum up(,)- make use of punctuation
Feedback : word on spelling errors and sentence structure is very simple and basic , make use of varied range. point of view is also not clear, seems to be contradicting at few places.