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  • Falak

    September 4, 2022 at 4:00 PM

    In introduction, your outline statement lacks highlights of 1st part of the question ( factors driving), same is the case with conclusion

    taco bell (Taco bell) ; proper noun

    every corners (every is followed by singular nouns)

    First body paragraph talks about advantages , but the words and language usage should be presented in a way where reader can understand these are the factors which are driving this trend. Maybe a more coherent topic sentence will be helpful

    Answer is somehow, partially developed. I would like to see more dependent clauses/complex structures.

    Band: 3/6

    Keep writing !!

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