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  • Falak

    Administrator
    September 4, 2022 at 5:49 PM

    tackle the global warming, (this environmental shift)

    Although, it is an opinion of masses that climate has deteriorated businesses (when) there are others who believe that it

    This essay will illustrate the adverse effects and also positive outlook of environment shift. (along with my opinion)

    global warming (has) increased which

    I would suggest to come with one more reason for B.P 2, as we need to develop both arguments equally

    to draw conclusion instead of being repetitive with as a result , we can also use “Hence”, “thus”, “consequently”

    would like to see more variety of sentence structures (complex)

    Keep writing!!!

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