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tackle the global warming, (this environmental shift)
Although, it is an opinion of masses that climate has deteriorated businesses (when) there are others who believe that it
This essay will illustrate the adverse effects and also positive outlook of environment shift. (along with my opinion)
global warming (has) increased which
I would suggest to come with one more reason for B.P 2, as we need to develop both arguments equally
to draw conclusion instead of being repetitive with as a result , we can also use “Hence”, “thus”, “consequently”
would like to see more variety of sentence structures (complex)
Keep writing!!!
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