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  • Lakshya

    September 6, 2022 at 5:59 PM

    Nowadays crime rates have been increased considerably in today’s world, some people believe that many offenders commit more crime after serving their first punishment. This essay will discuss about how this trend happened and what are the steps that can be taken to solve this problem.

    The first and foremost thing is that, the prisoners who get first their punishment faces many struggles in prison. On the other way, person who gets long punishment due to their serious crimes often change their characters. They get interacted with other offenders who are serving long imprisonment. The reason behind this is, it gets worse situations in prison for individual to survive with other offenders with serious crimes. Secondly, people who get their punishment also faces many issues in society, society treats them like a criminal even after getting bail. Therefore, they feel themselves isolated from the society and this may lead them to commit more crimes as they already have an stamp of criminal.

    In order to solve this problem, people who have served first punishment should be sent to rehabilitation center. Moreover, people are being <font color=”rgba(0, 0, 0, 0)” face=”inherit”>sent to rehabilitation </font>center<font color=”rgba(0, 0, 0, 0)” face=”inherit”> for various problems such as drug addicted or prisoners. It can help them in </font>rejuvenate<font color=”rgba(0, 0, 0, 0)” face=”inherit”> their mind and it may </font>lead them to commit less crime. Furthermore, there are some changes which need to be done in society to do not differentiate with them after getting bail.

    To conclude, it has been often seen that prisoners commit more crime after their punishment. However, this problem can be tackled by sending them in rehabilitation center. Besides this, the perception of society should also be changed to get rid of this issue.

    -‘To begin with’ is missing

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    – Needs proofreading once.

    Overall= 5/6.

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