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    Mishi

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    June 11, 2021 at 10:32 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -9 (Foreign Language)

    Learning an overseas language requires a lot of attention and willpower. In this essay, I will be comparing three convenient ways of learning a foreign language. I am going to elucidate three ways and they are the following, studying on your own, taking lessons with a private tutor, and taking lessons as part of a class.

    First and foremost, I believe studying on your own terms is a very beneficial and less stressful way of learning a foreign language. For example, the Korean language can be learnt via watching videos and listening to songs in that particular language and trying to imitate the language. Nevertheless, there are some cons to this method as there is no evaluation a person may not know their fault, which can lead to a wrong approach towards the language hence, making this way less suitable.

    Secondly, there is the way of taking private tuition, this is a very suitable way of learning a foreign language. For example, a tutor can guide you in a way that is more desirable and fascinating, a tutor will evaluate you and bring your focus towards the correct viewpoint .the very disadvantage of this is that some students may find it difficult to open up to a tutor thus making it difficult to learn the language.

    lastly, taking lessons as part of a class can bring forward the competitive spirit that can raise your learning . For instance, exam conductions can boost up your ways of approaching the language. but there is a disadvantage of this way and that is some people might get discouraged by a lot of competitors around and also can lose their confidence making it difficult to focus on learning.

    To conclude, I strongly believe that one should try learning a foreign language the way they prefer. this is because it can give them satisfaction as well as the pleasure of learning it their own way.

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    Mishi

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    June 8, 2021 at 11:09 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -7 (Outdoor Activities)

    It seems to me that activities play a very influential role in the growth and development of a child but, there is a conflict among some people on whether outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than computer games. Personally, I think that outdoor activities are more beneficial.

    It is obvious that outdoor games bring out a companionship which is very necessary for a healthy society .children playing outdoor games get to learn a lot of things, for instance, they hurt themselves, fight, laugh, cry, get defeated, and then evolve from such experiences. , In my experience, acquaintances are made by the experience of outdoor activities, children hang out with each other share each other’s experiences, and learn lessons that can help them in their problems. Hence, I believe outdoor activities are very essential for children.

    On the other hand, if I am to see the present era of the covid pandemic then it is obvious that outdoor activities are not possible, in that case, computer games might be of some use but it also has their perks, prolonged use of computer can have bad effects on eyes it can also cause carpel turner and can also make the child have their world revolving around four walls with just the computer system and this can lead the child to have a problem socializing with people around in the future.

    Overall, I would like to say that it is very important for children to have friends and be able to socialize with people who can enhance their knowledge on becoming a better person. So on the whole, outdoor activities are more beneficial for children.

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    Mishi

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    June 7, 2021 at 10:32 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 4 (Crimes)

    Crime, the intentional commission of an act usually deemed socially harmful or dangerous and the world is an enigma of crime and to decrease it some people recommend implementing a longer prison sentence while other favour better alternatives that can reduce crime. Although, my viewpoint is similar to the latter statement.

    There are numerous ways that can help in bringing down crimes, extracurricular activities like art, craft, gardening, listening to music can enhance a person that has been doing evil deeds. Government should encourage people to conduct awareness campaigns which in return will help in creating awareness among the commoners, employment opportunities should be available for people so that they don’t emerge into the world of crime, crime rate can be reduced by providing proper education and employment, awareness of good and evil should be taught to the common people to make the world a better place free of crime.

    On the other hand, a prolonged prison sentence can bury a person’s hope, a hope that can change an evil person to a better one, the same routine of prison and its prevalent bullying lends a hand in destroying a person completely.

    I would like to summarize the discussion by saying that crime rates can be reduced by teamwork. government and commoners both should work hand in hand to bring about awareness among people to reduce crime


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