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Rashmi, you have done a commendable job in this piece of writing.
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These advantages are overshadowed by the negative effects it bring(s) along
The letter on the beaches has cost the state with loss of ecological balance and (subsequently) many species of some subaqueous animals are unfortunately, now extinct.
Unless concerted efforts are made by the persons (people: persons may be correct in philosophical writing, however in IELTS test, always use plural – people, when referring to more than 1 person) in power.
Band Score: 5.5/6.0
