Feedback : need to focus on sentence structure, try to use variety of structures ( complex, compound etc.) . Transition words are missing . Vocabulary needs to be more sophisticated. Be cautious with prepositions. As “partially agree” essay, second body paragraph could be more elaborative.
Band : 1.5/6
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