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INTRODUCTION: paraphrase the question statement
enormous- incorrect word choice
BP 1: these days have- has
selling- are selling
tends- tend
to use them- and use it
In addition to- incorrect usage of linking word
becoming internet worn- and become internet worm
BP 2: no idea- have no idea
no close and- have no close
has a whole- as a whole
never had met- they have never met
or in the near- or shall meet
Conclusion- individual- individuals
BAND SCORE: 4/6 Keep working
