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Feedback: Well formed essay, need to work on more cohesive devices with more related words, no example found as well. Introduction needs to be improved as out line sentence is not appropriate.
Band: 3/6
Feedback: Well formed essay, need to work on more cohesive devices with more related words, no example found as well. Introduction needs to be improved as out line sentence is not appropriate.
Band: 3/6
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