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INTRODUCTION: paraphrase clearly
people- redundantly used twice
people’s- their
BP1: society a lot- a society that a lot
ecosystems- different ecosystems
BP2: put up: implement
heavy fine is not a law its a punishment
the repeated offenses- repeat offenders
put up clearer ways- spread awareness and issue guidelines on how
Like- For instance,
Also the same for recycling bins- Also, the recycling bins can be made colour-coded
separately can- separately which can
CONCLUSION: I am certain- do not use this phrase in formal essay writing
the increase of- an increase in recycling
BAND SCORE: 3.5/6 Keep Writing!
