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INTRODUCTION: problems- cause problems
BP1: lands- land
home- native
may lead- can further result into
give general examples
BP2: at overseas- overseas
they deprive- they are deprived of
read the important- read important
with this issue- because of this
Correlative comparative- rewrite- The lesser the knowledge of foreign language, the more the suffer
Conclusion: their- the country’s
entering- relocating
ask for help- they can easily ask for help
BAND SCORE: 3/6 KEEP WRITING!
