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Introduction- paraphrase the question statement more clearly
BP1: place-whether: place whether
a living- a house
or work- can- or work can
in the blue- in the blues
their entire- the entire
since the- since,
discomforts- discomfort
BP 2: places- different places
This can be exemplified- Take for example, – While stating examples uss example linkers
Conclusion: distort and jumble- distortion and clumsiness
summarise your main points
Remarks: Clarity in thoughts
Band Score:4/6 Keep Writing!
