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Deleted UserAugust 9, 2021 at 3:07 PMINTRODUCTION: include main points in your thesis statement
BP1: First of all, firstly- write either one of them
scare- scared
county- spelling mistake- country
country people- people of different nationalities
don’t mention the country name in your example. Give general examples
BP2: choice making- different choices
a stress- stress
Conclusion: summarise your main points clearly.
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