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There has been an endless debate that people living in the city have more perks in comparison with those living in the countryside. I strongly agree with this and can justify this with some facts and examples in the following paragraphs.
Undoubtedly, people living in the city enjoy the benefits of the latest development in various fields like schools, hospitals, coaching institutions and even in buying the daily essentials. For example, there are various apps that can deliver all the necessary items like groceries, vegetables etc (etc.)at your doorsteps. In addition to this, hospitals in the city have all the latest medical equipment which are nowadays required in the diagnosis of diseases. There are coaching institutions for every competition exam and also massive job opportunities are present in the urban areas.
On the contrary, some of the rural areas do not even have senior secondary schools. Furthermore, people have to run out of their areas for some medical treatments as hospitals in their areas do not have the latest technologies. For example, daily we are hearing ( we are hearing almost daily) that many human beings in the countryside are dying because of the non-availability of hospital beds and oxygen cylinders during the spread of the COVID 19 pandemic. Also, the benefits like easy access to the airports and entertainments (entertainment) sources like shopping malls, cinema theatres, restaurants etc(etc.) are missing in rural areas.
In conclusion, for majority kind of luxury, entertainment and latest advancements, countryside people have to rush out of their home place and urban people have easy access to these commodities. In my opinion, city life is more enjoyable than life in the countryside.
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Task response is satisfactory within word limits. Lexical resource is limited and can be further improved. Minor Grammar & punctuation errors which does not attract attention. Good use of cohesive devices like ‘furthermore’, in addition to, on the contrary etc.
Band Score : 4.5/6
