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Dear Steffi,
I am overwhelmed on learning (to learn)that you are coming to look after my pet (Oliver) and home for (a) few days.
I am not sure about the contact number I will be using there but I will be calling you from my hotel once I have reached there. You can also reach me out (reach out to me)at tanyagupta@mail.com. I hope, you will not have to face any problem in contacting me.
Oliver is a well disciplined dog and you have to feed him twice a day with one bowl of pedigree which is kept in his room. Make sure that his water bowl is always filled and he needs a walk after both the feeds for pooping and peeing. Rest he manages on his own.
Apart from this, you are required to mop the floors once in 3 days as oliver(Oliver) has huge hairfall problem. Milkman comes at 6 pm and if you are not available at that time, you may not get milk till the next evening. Keep all the doors locked for the safety reasons and do not let anyone to enter the house.
See you soon.
Best, (Best wishes),
Tanya
Feedback :
The letter covers all the task requirements and states the purpose of the letter. The tone, though assertive, is consistently polite. There is a good range of vocabulary that is more than adequate. Although there are errors in collocation and word choice, there are also many examples of accurate choice and appropriate modification. A mix of simple and complex structures is used, but mistakes in prepositions and in areas such as article use limit the rating for this criterion.
Band Score : 2/3
