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Deleted UserAugust 30, 2021 at 9:55 AMOpening Statement- works- construction or repair as per the context
BP 1: Add more details
BP 2: Since- From last month
Large decibel noise- voice is not large- collocation error- rephrase to high
BP 3: the disturbance- any disturbance
noise free types of- noise free
levels- level
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