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Deleted UserSeptember 2, 2021 at 9:49 AMIntroduction- in railways- on railways
BP1: led to increase- led to an increase
roadside accidents, rise in fuel consumption- roadside accidents and rise in fuel consumption
BP2: routes and schedules- route and schedule
in time- on time
Conclusion- summaries the main points clearly
Band Score: 3/6 Keep Writing!