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* “in response to our discussion on flight”
I think a better way of saying this would be “to follow up on the discussion we had on the flight to NY”
* I believe ‘in-house’ should be hyphenated. Please check.
* ‘rewarded with [a title]’ is not grammatically wrong. However, ‘awarded [a title]
is more commonly used.
* ‘I think, I am best fit’ ( ‘I am best fit’ might not be correct. I am not sure what the correct form should be. It could be ‘the best fit’. Please check)
Score : 5/6
