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I writing this in regards to my absence on 31/01/2022 in the meeting regarding the new updates of Fannie Mae for conventional mortgage loans and changes in DU. (and apologize for the same)
I had to go to hospital urgently as (the father of one of my friends) one of my best friends father got really sick and there was no one to help him
my friend and his father was (were) at home,
Suddenly he (his father) felt sick due to which he panicked and called me (“he” was becoming quite repetitive and creating confusion)
Your Faithfully (sincerely)
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