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In today’s era of well standard of living, unpaid community service is as important as paid service.In today’s era of well standard of living, unpaid community service is as important as paid service. (I am not very convinced with the background statement as it seems to be out of the context)
Example in B.P 1, needs to bit more coherent or explained
Word count of given essay is 235 , which should be 250 words minimum. Clearly, the explanation and reasons have not been developed fully. The criteria of Task response is compromised.
Band: 3/6
