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Today we will be discussing about professional outfits benefits and drawback in companies. ( There is some definite pattern to write introduction which includes paraphrasing, outline and thesis statement, kindly follow that)
them (there) to help.
question was “many organizations and companies ask their staff to wear uniform”, though essay seems to go tangential with approach , its completely highlighting the personal benefits of wearing uniform. I would appreciate if you align he reasons with company perspective too, that will add coherence to essay.
Band: 2/6
