[Swati]

The chart represents the ground on which often individuals choose whether to travel to work by a car or bicycle.

The first chart illustrates various reasons for cycling to work. Mostly, people prefer cycling because it directly helps them to maintain a healthy physical health, with 30% of the individuals citing this as the most important reason. Next, 30% think cycling cuts down the emission of polluting gases. Furthermore, 15% look at this as a way of saving huge amount of time by not having to worry about parking also 13% pointed out that cycling is cost effective. 12% mentioned they don’t get stuck in traffic and reaches their destination faster.

The second chart talks about the basis on which people decide to use a car to work. We can see that 40% think of driving as a comfortable mode to travel whereas, earlier we saw that 30% chose cycling to stay fit. Also, the distance to reach work can be covered faster than a bicycle which is believed by 21% population. Comparing to the previous chart where 12% believe that a bicycle takes us to places faster, 14% think otherwise in this chart. A car can carry numerous essential things to work which is consented by 14% population in addition to that 11% find car safer than cycling.

[Isha Singha]

The chart represents the ground on which individuals choose whether to travel to work by a car or bicycle.

The first chart illustrates various reasons for cycling to work. Mostly, people prefer cycling because it directly helps them to maintain a healthy physical health, with 30% of the individuals citing this as the most important reason. Next, 30% think cycling cuts down on the emission of polluting gases. Furthermore, 15% look at this as a way of saving a huge amount of time by not having to worry about parking. Also, 13% pointed out that cycling is cost effective. 12% mentioned they don’t get stuck in traffic and reach their destination faster.

The second chart talks about the basis on which people decide to use a car to work. We can see that 40% think of driving as a comfortable mode of travel, whereas earlier we saw that 30% chose cycling to stay fit. Also, the distance to reach work can be covered faster than on a bicycle, which is believed by 21% of the population. Compared to the previous chart, where 12% believe that a bicycle takes us to places faster, 14% think otherwise in this chart. A car can carry numerous essential things to work, which is consented by 14% of the population. In addition to that, 11% find cars safer than cycling.

Feedback:

Overview, is important. You did not write overview.

Review your work properly to avoid grammatical errors. Focus on the right use of articles.

Band Score – 2/3

[Unknown Member]

The following pie chart shows the reasons and benefits of cycling to work and driving to work.

Overall, riding to work illustrates more benefits on health, fitness and caused less pollution when compared with other advantages like no costs and no parking problems. Whereas the major reason for going to work by vehicle was comfort, which covered half of the chart and safety part occupied least portion among all the other reasons.

In cycling, health and less pollution occupied 30% each and covered more than half of the chart. The second reason given by most of the people was two wheelers had no parking problems which hold 15%. 13% humans said that, going to work by cycle requires no cost and saves a lot of money. 12% of the individuals believed that riding to the office by two wheeler is faster than four wheeler.

The major reason preferred by most of the people for traveling to the office by vehicle is comfort, which is 40% and grabbed almost 50% of the chart. Rest of the other reasons like faster than cycling, carrying things to work covered 14% and very few members claimed that driving is safer than riding.

[Isha Singha]

he following pie chart shows the reasons and benefits of cycling to work and driving to work.

Overall, riding to work illustrates more benefits for health and fitness and causes less pollution when compared with other advantages like no costs and no parking problems. Whereas the major reason for going to work by vehicle was comfort, which covered half of the chart, the safety part occupied the least amount of space among all the other reasons.

In cycling, health and less pollution occupied 30% each and covered more than half of the chart. The second reason given by most people was that two-wheelers had no parking problems, which held 15%. 13% of humans said that going to work by cycle requires no cost and saves a lot of money. 12% of people thought riding a two-wheeler to work was faster than riding a four-wheeler.

The major reason preferred by most people for traveling to the office by vehicle is comfort, which accounted for 40% of the chart. The rest of the other reasons, like being faster than cycling, carrying things to work, covered 14% of the total, and very few members claimed that driving is safer than riding.

Feedback:

Grammatical errors and right choice of words.

Band Score – 2/3