[Koppolu Preethi]

Nowadays environmental issues have became major concern.Natural resources like Plants and animal species are badly being affected by some of the human activities like cutting trees, water pollution, occupying forest lands.This made some people to think that this problem is irreversible and might not have any solution to resolve it. However, I believe that it is never too late to start taking measures for improving this situation.

On one hand, some people believe that this problem cannot be solved because the negative effects that people have made are not reversible.Some of the human activities like deforestation, global warming ,ozone layer depletion caused extinction of rare species of plants and animals.Due to these environmental issues, few of the species both from plants and animals cannot grow back again even after taking several measures.This made to feel the action cannot be irreversible.

On the other hand, some people believe that it is never too late to do something to save the environment. It is well known fact that there is huge damage environment but that doesn’t mean people keep on damaging the world. There need to be certain measures taken to save the environment. We can plant more trees where there is deforestation happening, there can be measures to save the species which are about to extinct, we can control greenhouse gases as it affects the ozone layer. Such measures help to save the damage done to plant and animal species.

To conclude, however how much damage has been done to the environment by human activities, there can always be some measures taken to save the planet. People need to take care about their activities and keep in concern the damage being done to the environment.

[Manprit]

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[Siri]

Human activities indeed affecting the plant and animal species in many ways. Few people believe it’s too late to take any action. While, other group of people believe that there’s a chance of retrieving back everything that has been lost by taking necessary meausures. In the following paragraphs, I would like to balance both views by giving relevant examples.

To commence with, Human activities are indeed causing negative effects to the plant and animal species. Deforestation which is done by the forest department in order to build a modern society, is causing a major threat to the endangered plant and animal species. The increase in pollution in the city by using motor vehicles is causing a negative effect on the living species. Due to the death of many plant species in the cities, the oxygen and carbon dioxide levels are degrading which are very essential for the survival of living species. For example, in recent studies on plant and animal species have shown that, human activities are one of the main reasons causing threat to the plant and animal species. They have also found that it indirectly effects the humans in many ways.

However, by taking necessary actions on plant and animal species, it is possible to change the current scenario. Government should take appropriate measures by cooperating with NGO’s to bring back the situation to normal. A guideline must be provided for setting up an industry, providing information on releasing the toxins in the atmosphere. Awareness programs on the importance of living plants and animals should be conducted in public places. For instance, “Go Green” program which is very popular in India is a step towards promoting the green lifestyle to protect the plant species, which indirectly protects the animal species as well.

On the whole, in my opinion by taking appropriate measures with the help of government and NGO’s ,it is possible to change the negative effects on the living species.

[Manprit]

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[Kapil]

In the 21st century, environment conservation becomes the biggest challenge on the earth for the human being because they culprit the major role to disturb the natural life cycle. It is considered by pessimist that situation is now out of control to get solved, while there are others who think the right steps towards the save habitat improve the situation. I completely agree with statement. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall discuss both views with examples.

First of all, in this era, it becomes easy for person to land on the moon because of the expansion in the science and technology field, but it impacts negatively on the eco-system. For instance, it is a fact that industrialization, deforestation, farming and burning fossil fuel are mainly cause of the globalization, which is directly influence on the weather of the earth. In the 1800s, people didn’t face the issue of air pollution but now it occurs normal in a plethora of the cities.

On the other hand, others including me reckon there have multiple possibilities to defence our habitat if people strongly decided to take initiative for the globe. Firstly, Government have authority to banned the deforestation and launch new projects for the reforestation. Secondly, individual can take responsibility to grow new plants and avoid to use own transportation for the ride. They can use public transport or bicycle in short distance. Finally, through the development of new forest leads to secure the animals and territory. It is better if everyone insists to use eco-friendly products. Sweden is one the best example which could apply the rules and regulation in the favor of nature, therefore it could be secure the first rank in the world for provide the fresh air to their population.

To conclude, it is high time to save the nature and wild life otherwise future generation might be have to buy the oxygen instead of get free of cost, even disappear of species also impacts on the life cycle of the planet so it is individual responsibility to take initiative for contribution to the society. It is not irretrievable to save the soil.