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WRITING TASK-2 PROBLEM-SOLUTION ESSAY
Tourism has caused environmental problems in many parts of the world.
What sorts of problems have been caused?
What can be done about them?
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In this growing world several sectors are emerging day by day and one of them is Tourism
More over to that traveling is the most common activity which is entertained by everyone
around the world. but everything which involves human will have a concerned problem which
affects the environment. This will be further elaborated in the essay that what are the issues
caused by tourism and what are the certain activities which can solve them.
To begin with, tourism is one of leading business around the world and it helps a country
financially. Firstly, a tourist is coming to enjoy the place and that is why they are not
concerned to behave in a disciplined manner and it leads to problems like pollution. Secondly,
they are visiting new place and if they haven’t done a good amount of research they might
be unaware of the place culture which leads to another issue which is disturbing the culture.
For instance, tourists coming from USA to India starts exploring places and randomly visit ad
temple without taking off their shoes and in India it’s not allowed to wear shoes in temple.
That’s how tourists affect the environment.
On the other hand, to solve these issues things which need to be done are. Firstly, constructing
tourism centers in every tourist attracting places. Secondly, awaking the locals about how to
guide tourist so that they do not affect the culture and teach them how to do certain things.
for example, A tourist who visited India for the first time can be guided that he/she can not
wear any leather material things while entering in temple. these small exercises can help
to solve a huge issue.
In conclusion, tourism can be promoted more and more to make a healthy world but this can be
possible only if they respect the other places boundaries and follows the place rules and
regulations.
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It cannot be denied that tourism is causing numerous problems these days. This is mainly increasing due to commercial flights and garbage thrown by tourists anywhere. There are a number of solutions which can be implemented to cope these issue.
In recent times it has been seen that commercial flights are increasing which is causing global warming worsly. Large number of people are using car, bus and taxi and which is effecting nature. Another reason is public throwing rubbish garbage in tourist spot they visit.For example, many beaches in Goa has been spoiled due to throwing everything on seaside which is not just affecting human lives but also lives of
marines. Moreover, it has been badly affected the lives of animals as the garbage has gone inside them and it lead them to their death.There are some methods which very helpful in alleviating these troubles. To commence with, tourist authorities of all tourist places should promote the usage of electrical vehicles. This can improve the air quality by eliminating the air pollutants. Furthermore, tourist authorities should also impose a penalty to get rid of throwing wastage in public spots. Air authorities should also set a limit of tourists flying by flights which can help in reducing the global warming.
To conclude, the environmental issues caused by number of tourists are due to pollution and throwing wastage in public places and these problems can be tackled by imposing a penalty as well reducing the number of flights as well as private vehicles.
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