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rectify ( may not be the right word to use)
such a comfortable circumstance would results (result)
family meet (fulfills)
\they grew (grow) up like arrogant and stubborn
with its’ (its)
but also on jobs (on career prospects)
single parents often chose (choose) to loosen their authoritative rules
inept in (at) money management
Great use of lexical resources. Well-done. Take care of the points I mentioned above
Band: 4.5/6