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i (I) am really sorry that i (I) did not
and (I am) planning to travel and explore new things with you.
Last week(,) i (I) had done shopping from
there was (were) some coupon
r i am (was shocked) in shocked
cannot (couldn’t) believe that my
one of the fascinating place(s)
It is famous for their (its) beautiful beaches
who came (come)
third bullet point has not been addressed, partially developed response
Paragraphing is inappropriate
Need to work grammar accuracy.
Basically, there is need to work on all the four parameters.
