-
Feedback:
Intro:
In the current digital era, Internet has evolved into the most significant aspect of our daily lives. Currently, virtual newspapers …
BP1 : First and foremost, reading news online has the advantage of being easily available and convenient to read. Digital news on the internet is constantly refreshed, whereas newspaper content is limited in its freshness.
– Well organized.
– Coherent and right use of connectors.
– Add examples in your body paragraphs.
Keep practicing .
Bands : 4/6