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  • isha

    April 6, 2023 at 10:17 PM

    In today’s era, considering that modern medicine has become increasingly expensive and hard to retain for longer duration, people have started looking towards alternative medicines and treatments. While I believe it’s a positive development, it’s not without its risks.

    Firstly, it’s increasingly getting clear that modern branded medicine is getting expensive on a daily basis. Along with its increasing price, it also has few side effects if consumed for longer periods. Considering these factors, turning attention towards alternative treatments and medicinal therapies like yoga is a natural move. Following through on such treatments can often lead to a better, healthier lives while getting rid of addiction to modern medicine. We can also observe that a few big companies are looking to sell more medicine, often at the expense of the patient, which becomes another reason for the same trend.

    Although such treatments are getting more advanced, there are also quite a few risks involved, for example, in the case where alternate medicinal treatments are not taken on the advice of a doctor and are taken without any diagnostics. Also, we need to verify the sources of such treatments as being valid and not taken without any prescription. Considering these factors, we can also gain an understanding that alternative medicine needs more research in order to become more viable.

    In conclusion, I gather a positive trend is being developed for moving towards alternative medicine and treatments, considering all the downsides, the profit-making culture of big pharma companies, and the connected ecosystem. Although it’s a positive move, we as consumers of alternative medicine need to be more informed and knowledgeable about such treatments and should not consider them without proper consultation.

    – Use punctuation marks.

    – If you choose alternative medicines, then use one paragraph for its benefits ,discussing why you agree that alternative medicines are better.

    -In 2 BP, use name of treatment instead of such treatment. It will give more clarity.

    Bands – 3.5/4

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