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  • isha

    June 1, 2023 at 9:36 PM

    The pictures depict the changes that occurred in Felixstone between 1967 and 2001. Major changes are commercialization of the farmland and beach site.

    Overall, the seaside town underwent a number of dramatic changes, the most important of which were the disappearance of farmland, the development of amenities catering for recreational activities, and the demolition of the port beside the beach.

    In 1967, there was a golf course towards the west, which has not undergone any changes since 2001. To the east, there used to be farmland that was developed into a hotel, tennis courts, and a swimming pool in 2001. In between golf course and the farmland, there’s a high street connecting the main road with shops on either side. In 1967, shops on the right side of the high street were replaced with apartments.

    To the south of Felixstone, a major swap can be seen. Partition of the beach into public and private, removal of the fish market, marina, and pier were done in 2001. Wind turbines under the dunes and car park near the hotel were also installed at that time. However, the café in the southwest has remained untouched.

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