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Feedback: Approach is good, content is also expectable, try to avoid repetition of information as found in 1st para 2nd line & 2nd para 1st line about the “Offenders” rest in intro “Crimes of all sorts are on the rise” this needs to be improved. Need to work on word limit, sentence formation, & few more impactful vocabularies.
Band: 2.5/6
