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Feedback: Simple language is used with limited sentence types however the content is good but execution got failed, few Grammatical errors found such as:
“some of them believes” , “who are earning well but still engage”, “The country will be developed if number of people will be well educated and they would have enough earnings to fulfill their basic needs.”
Need to work on these things rigorously.