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AdministratorJune 8, 2021 at 12:36 PM350 Network PointsActivity Points 8530
Feedback: Need to work on thought process as the there is no relevant information found, no example, sentence formation is also not up to the mark that caused grammatical error “children playing outdoor games get to learn a
lot of things” children playing outdoor games get to learn a
lot of things, & also use more complex sentences instead limited structures.