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Feedback: Very well executed & god use of related words, rest try to avoid silliest grammatical error: “Cultural and social intermixing occurs” & use few more linking words in 2nd para such as: even though, however, while, firstly etc.
Band: 4/6
Feedback: Very well executed & god use of related words, rest try to avoid silliest grammatical error: “Cultural and social intermixing occurs” & use few more linking words in 2nd para such as: even though, however, while, firstly etc.
Band: 4/6
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