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  • Falak

    Administrator
    June 15, 2021 at 12:51 PM
    200 Network Points
    Activity Points 3010

    Feedback : need to focus on sentence structure, try to use variety of structures ( complex, compound etc.) . Transition words are missing . Vocabulary needs to be more sophisticated. Be cautious with prepositions. As “partially agree” essay, second body paragraph could be more elaborative.

    Band : 1.5/6