Feedback: Minimum 250 words should be there (these are only 148 words). Statement needs to be paraphrased in introduction. Avoid being repetitive in word aand ideas. Use impactful vocabulary. Answer has not been fully addressed. More detailing is required to support your main idea, examples are missing.
Band: 1/6
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