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Feedback: Execution is good.Make use of punctuation marks (to begin with, however,). No shortforms(Use for instance , for example rather than for eg.). Be cautious with use of “there and their”.Synonyms for toxic : injurious, destructive, noxious, pernicious etc.). Try to make use of wide range of transition words( despite, though, regardless, inspite of- as contrasting connectors , don’t stick to “However” only).
Band: 3/6
