NIL Community

Find answers, ask questions, and connect with our
community around the world.

  • Falak

    July 5, 2021 at 7:57 PM

    Feedback : Use of preposition ( it should be beneficial for children’s health, as “beneficial to” is used for whom). Make use of punctuation for longer sentences. Stick to “subject-verb agreement”. Variety of sentence structures has been observed.

    Band : 3/6

We are here to help

Conversational Form (#3)