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  • shubham

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    July 5, 2021 at 8:51 PM

    Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life.

    To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

    Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

    In today’s era women are the strong pillars of the society. Both men and women are treated equally in every aspect of life.However,many people believe that women should only focus on upbringing of the children and concentrate less on their working life. I completely disagree with this notion as women should not be forced to nurture their children only.

    First of all, women are excelling in each and every field.In the corporate world most of the important positions in company are held by women.For instance,in most of the fortune 500 companies the position of Chief Executive officer are held by women,that depicts women are not mere to up bring their infants.Furthermore,women are playing an important role in politics too. For example, the prime minister of New Zealand(Jacinda Ardern) set new benchmarks for all the nations during the global pandemic.Her policies for curbing corona virus was praised by every nation.

    Another point to consider is that,nowadays both guardians are working.So.its the responsibility of both men and women to maintain a balance between personal and working life.For instance, famous personality couples are usually working but they make sure to nourish their child properly.

    In conclusion,I think both parents should raise their children by balance responsibilities.

    However, the myth that only females are responsible for nourishing their children proved wrong in the above analysis, which is a good step to stop gender discrimination.

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