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  • Abhinav

    Administrator
    July 6, 2021 at 11:29 PM
    600 Network Points
    Activity Points 3920

    Feedback:

    Introduction paragraph does not clarify your opinion explicitly.

    To commence with and firstly, should not be used together.

    First and second body paragraphs should have been kept together because they are elaborating from one side. Third body paragraph needs a little more explanation.

    Band Score: 4.0/6.0

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