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  • Abhinav

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    July 6, 2021 at 11:35 PM

    Feedback:

    Structure is fine.

    There are so many grammatical errors that need to be corrected. You will be losing approximately one band for only the grammatical errors.

    Conclusion should be a little more elaborated, not a one liner.

    Band Score: 4.0/6.0

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