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  • Abhinav

    July 6, 2021 at 11:35 PM
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    Activity Points 3920


    Structure is fine.

    There are so many grammatical errors that need to be corrected. You will be losing approximately one band for only the grammatical errors.

    Conclusion should be a little more elaborated, not a one liner.

    Band Score: 4.0/6.0

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