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AdministratorJuly 6, 2021 at 11:35 PM600 Network PointsActivity Points 3920
Structure is fine.
There are so many grammatical errors that need to be corrected. You will be losing approximately one band for only the grammatical errors.
Conclusion should be a little more elaborated, not a one liner.
Band Score: 4.0/6.0