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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you to ask for your help to provide a part-time job with the employers that have a vacancy that suits my qualifications.
My name is Eman Rashed and I have a master degree in Molecular biology since 2017 from Qatar university. I have over 10 years of experience working as a research specialist at Cornell university with focus in human genetics.
During my time of working as a research specialist I gained several skills. Among these skills, (are)the ability to conduct scientific experiments without supervision and troubleshoot any problem I faced. Also, I have excellent organizing skills and managerial expertise that helped me a lot to manage my own lab.
I would like to join a research lab that has potentials in producing good scientific papers which can support me during the next level of my career. A Scientist position would be the best fit for me but I am open for any similar positions that suits(suit) my qualifications and experience.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Eman Rashed
Feedback:
Excellent effort, nothing major to point out here.
There are two grammatical errors noted, other than that sentence construction and paragraph structuring both are fine. If you could use two or three good vocabulary words, it would be a perfect letter of course except the grammatical errors.
Band Score: 2.5/3.0
