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  • Anureet

    July 19, 2021 at 4:13 PM

    Introduction- lack in giving punishment- lack of

    Thesis statement does not have main points

    Bp1- one of the main reason- main reasons

    Dont quote source in your example amd don’t use continuous tense unnecessarily

    Bp 2- criminals should provide- should be

    Police are- Police is- Police is always singular

    Note: Need to work on your thoughts and clarity. You will improve gradually.

    Band Score- 2.5/6

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