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  • Anureet

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    July 20, 2021 at 1:21 PM
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    Introduction- paraphrase the question statement, include the main points in your thesis statement

    BP 1: will be avoided- can be avoided- use the modal verb to show the possibility

    unison- incorrect word choice

    thus is used twice- shows redundancy

    BP 2: Avoid using for example as it is quite common- use for instance or take for example

    be even knowing- even know

    will be happening- can happen

    Conclusion- just sum up your main points

    BS: 4/6 Keep Working.