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  • NIL Admin

    Administrator
    July 20, 2021 at 5:08 PM
    1320 Network Points
    Activity Points 5920

    Feedback:

    Do not write the causes and effects in the introduction itself it should only contain paraphrasing and a thesis statement.

    Few grammatical errors noted nothing major

    Good use of lexical resources, however cohesion could be improved.

    Band Score: 4.5/6.0