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  • NIL Admin

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    July 20, 2021 at 5:13 PM

    The content is too short to give a proper feedback, however the grammar does not seem to be a problem. The structure is not at all in accordance with Ielts parameters. I’m sure you did not have time to finish the essay but any feedback would be irrelevant because of less information provided here.

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