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  • Anureet

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    July 21, 2021 at 8:33 AM
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    Introduction- work on paraphrasing

    if want to- if one wants to

    Include thesis statement instead of the complex sentence

    Rampant- incorrect word choice- spread rapidly

    obligatory- mandatory

    communicate to- communicate with

    Oral- omit this word

    Burry- bury

    Conclusion- to good- good

    Band score-3/6 Keep working