AnureetMemberJuly 21, 2021 at 9:02 AM
Introduction: Don’t include question statement in intro instead write a thesis statement stating the main points
BP 2: one of the most important disadvantage- disadvantages- always include a plural term after one of the
replacements to- of
one of the longest history- rephrase this line
loses their meaning- will result in a loss of their meaning
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