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  • Anureet

    July 21, 2021 at 9:06 AM

    INTRODUCTION: travels- travel

    include paraphrase and thesis statement

    BP 1: local history place- rephrase this line

    Incorrect complex sentence

    BP 2: loss of- loss

    countries has- have

    same and similar- similar

    Conclusion: summarise the main points

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