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Some people advocates = advocate.
Job satisfaction should be the utmost priority when it comes to job selection
Don’t use most with essential.
Investing your precious life in jobs which does not=do not
The structuring is excellent you have maintained the integrity of the writing. There are few grammatical errors noted mentioned above. Lexical resources abundant. Conclusion could have been a little better the first sentence in the conclusion does not seem good.