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  • NIL Admin

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    July 21, 2021 at 3:35 PM
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    Some people advocates = advocate.

    Job satisfaction should be the utmost priority when it comes to job selection

    Don’t use most with essential.

    Investing your precious life in jobs which does not=do not

    Feedback:

    The structuring is excellent you have maintained the integrity of the writing. There are few grammatical errors noted mentioned above. Lexical resources abundant. Conclusion could have been a little better the first sentence in the conclusion does not seem good.